HCC-EAP  Writing 5
Spring 2019
Data Driven Learning Approach to Writing Better Essays
COHESIVENESS
 . . means the essay holds together
LOGICAL – It makes sense: nothing irrelevant included; reasons and facts provided to support ideas
SEQUENTIAL – proceeds in chronological order (usually)
SPATIAL – certain types of essays are organized according to space
 
What are "Adverbials"? First, think about Adverbs
Three ways that adverbs function - They answer these wh- questions
When – They begin a time clause. During the night the baby cried.
Why – They begin a clause that explains a cause or effect of an action, or a condition under which it occurs.
Even if it rains, I am going to go running.
Because of the car accident, his insurance is now expensive
How – They explain how the action was done. -ly
 
 
Language Detective Exploration of MICUSP and Linking Adverbials   

This website will guide you to explore Linking Adverbials in the Michigan Corpus of Upper Level Student Papers (MICUSP)

LAs are often part of an ADVERB CLAUSE - in the dependent (subordinate) clause. For example,
–Because of the rain
–While Helen was cooking
–Although it was 90 degrees outside

“By overtly signaling to readers how pieces of information work together to support a claim, Linking adverbials (LAs) can help writers make a stronger and more persuasive argument to their audience” (Mauranen, 1993)

Definition and Importance of Linking Adverbials (LAs)
Link complex ideas within the essay, paragraph and sentence
More sophisticated than correlative conjunctions, they show how  . . .
Make an essay more cohesive
Examples – besides, because, although, instead of, since, furthermore
 

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Overview of Website and Activities
There are four activities on this site that you and a partner will complete after the introduction by the instructor. At the top of the...
Navigation to Activities
The drop down menu and your instruction will help you to navigate this site.
Searching, Reading, Writing, Thinking
The first activity will involve searching for LAs in your own essay(s). The second activity will include searching the MICUSP corpus...